Paragraph #6 of the year

We are going through a section in grammar about writing. Today we had to write a descriptive paragraph on an animal. Well, Natalie, this is for you because I chose Ranger (who wouldn’t?)! I hope you like it. 🙂

Ranger is one of the most beautiful horses I’ve ever seen. His shining coat is the color of a well-creamed cup of coffee. His mane and tail are white-blonde and slightly wavy. He holds his head high with self-esteem and pride. His attitude towards people is friendly, though a little wary of strangers. The person he loves most is Natalie; he shows it by following her around and giving her horse “hugs”. When he runs he steps high with elegance. Grace and beauty are displayed in his rippling skin and flowing mane and tail. His greatest fear is of electric fence. I wish he were my horse!

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